Fiction Book Coaching Services

Do you have story idea but need help turning it into a strong, structured novel?

Our fiction book coaching services are designed for writers who want expert guidance with their plot development, character arcs, pacing, and story structure. We help you shape your story into a memorable manuscript—one that came from your soul.

Serena Montoya

Your Fiction Book Coach

Please review our Terms and Conditions page for more information about our services.

You must fill out the form below to get a free 30-minute consultation and work with me.

Fiction book coaching services

Step-by-Step

$75/session

What story questions do you have about your current project or concept?

This option allows you to ask those story questions you’ve always wanted answers to without committing to an entire program.

You will get a 1:1 hour-long Zoom call. Within 1-2 days after our coaching session, I will provide a one-page document via email with a summary of our discussion and my notes for your project.

  • This service includes up to 2,000 new words or 1,500 from your original outline/concept per session.

Book coaching services to make your writing a habit

Make it a habit

$380

Make your writing process a new habit.

You are ready to make writing a priority and have the perfect story idea to make that happen.

As your story coach, I’m ready to help you structure and develop the novel of your dreams. 

This package includes (6) six 1:1 hour-long Zoom coaching sessions. Within 1-2 days after our meeting, I will provide a one-page document via email with a summary of our discussion and my notes for your project.

You also get access to ask me specific question about your project via email during the gaps between sessions. Responses can take 1-2 business days.

  • This service includes up to 2,000 new words or 1,500 from your original outline/concept per session.

It's time to take your passion project and make it a book with our book coaching services

Passion Project

$720

Are you on a deadline, or plan to self-publish your book? Let’s talk about your passion project to get your narrative ready for readers.

You are ready to finish writing your book. You may already have a writing habit, but lack the confidence in your story structure skills.

This program is fit for those who are in need of a book coach to help them strengthen their prose and story structure. I aim to help writers craft meaningful stories they can be proud of.

This package includes (12) twelve 1:1 hour-long Zoom coaching sessions. Within 1-2 days after our meeting, I will provide a one-page document via email with a summary of our discussion and my notes for your project.

You also get access to ask me specific question about your project via email during the gaps between sessions. Responses can take 1-2 business days.

  • This service includes up to 2,000 new words or 1,500 from your original outline/concept per session.

Tell us more about your project.

Fill out this form below and let us know what your book is about. We offer FREE 30-minute consultations for new book projects. Let’s find out if we are the right fit for you!

Testimonials

Brian P. Kennedy

"Serena’s editorial analysis provided me with a variety of insightful perspectives. Her probing questions, specific ideas and clear direction helped me to see what I could not see myself. After considering her input, I wanted to dive back into my story and embrace her suggestions.”  

Rebecca Smith

"Serena’s professionalism can’t be matched. I’ve spent a lot of time researching editors, you can tell she truly practices what she preaches. She took her time and ensured I was satisfied with the revisions. I cannot recommend her enough!”  

Mayte M.

“Serena reviewed my manuscript with such precision and attention to detail. She was kind and honest, never stripping my voice, but helped me see where I could strengthen my book. I’m excited to dive back into my novel.”

Once your story is fully developed, you may be ready for professional editing.

What’s your story?

Book Coaching FAQ’s

  • A book coach helps writers craft a story; from concept to creation, we work with writers to develop their fiction book.

  • You must let us know 48 hours prior to our scheduled appointment, or you will forfeit your session. No refunds. But don’t worry, we will send you an email 48 hours before your scheduled appointment.

  • We can definitely discuss continuing our sessions and a new plan for your story!

  • If you’re looking for professionals to overview a story you’ve already written, you’re looking for an editorial assessment. We also offer that service. Get in touch with us to book your free consultation. We can discuss the best approach for your story and coaching options in that call.

  • Yes. We offer payment plans; however, they only apply to these book coaching services: make it a habit and passion project. Ask your book coach in your free consultation about payment plans. If you’re scheduling per session in our step-by-step plan, we do not offer payment plans.

  • Absolutely. Your book coach is in the writing trenches with you, and some errors may arise. It’s always best to get another set of eyes on your manuscript.